Analysis of Who Sets the Rules?



The book of rules
in which images and words never fade
Who rewrites the same edition for every decade
who illustrates the way it is?

In a world where there’s diversity:
gays, straights, blacks, whites
You check the boxes given
never allowed to think otherwise

Your very heart beats to a rhythm you’re forbidden to step to.

Your feet pegged
wings clipped
Who makes the rules who illustrates the way it is?

Replace your legs with pegs and dig a hole and slide in
fitting in place, cause that’s when they’ll say you’re living it right.

You suffocate.
Your air isn’t your own
What’s in the air you breath
if you can’t dance and sing and laugh
is that too much to ask?
does it mean you can’t be a friend, a mother a wife?  

Claim your life before they claim yours
Or be the heir to their own life!


Scheme XAAB XXXX X XXB XX XXXXXC XC
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 0110001101 10101010110001 1100111 001110100 1111 1101010 10011110 1101110101100111 111 11 11011100111 111110101010 10011111111011 110 11111 000111 11110101 111111 1111110101001 11101111 11011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 828
Words 172
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 1, 3, 2, 6, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

This poem is about female oppression in some communities especially in the Asian region.

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Submitted by nazmianver on February 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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