Analysis of "Cracks in the Mirror!"

Terrance L Cassidy 1956 (Pittsburgh)



“Cracks in the Mirror!”
                             ================                   
                                            by Michael

- I look at the World through broken branches of a dying tree -
- I look at my face and the cracks in the mirror and It’s just not me --
- i can’t fix the mirror the cracks have to be ---

- More time is behind then I'll be alive!-
- I'm on day Twenty-three thousand eight hundred and five –-
- Accepting the truth shall keep me alive---

- I curse every crack as I climb thru my day -
- Pushing aside broken branches hoping cracks go away –
- Who am I kidding every crack's here to stay ---

- But there is truth in reality and acceptance should be made -
- That the cracks are forever and life’s dues must be
paid –
- It will continue to crack and never be stayed ---

- I have tried to postpone the inevitable out -
- But that's hard to do short of spiritual clout –
- I am in the 10th round of a 10-round bout ---

- The framing is older then any one crack -
- I have misspent some days I shall never look back –
- Now step out of the ring for times what I lack ---

- Time is illusive but our most precious gift –
- Moving the branches wishing they shift --
- But time keeps on going there is no face-lift---
*********************
T.L. Michael Cassidy


Scheme X X AAA BBB CCC DADD EEE FFF GGG A
Poetic Form
Metre 10010 1 110 111011101010101 11111001001001111 11101001111 1110111101 1111011011001 0100111101 111001111111 10011010101101 111101001111 11110100010111 101101001111 1 110101101011 1111010010001 111111110001 11001111011 01011011011 110111111011 11110111111 110101101101 100101011 11111011111 1 110100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,325
Words 262
Sentences 5
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 5
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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Living Life on Life's Rules

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Written on September 01, 2021

Submitted by terrance_c on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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