Analysis of The Homeless Lady



My smooth skin cuddled her frail form as the wind blew through her battered fingers when she reached out to me

I hesitated at the thought of her dinginess though compelled by some deep inner subconscious emotion.

As I pulled her from her shallow grave,
Instantly, I felt cold and hungry,
I saw pain and fear,
I was loneliness and death

The tears rolled down my cheeks as if freeing me from some horrid disease,

I felt cleansed

She looked into my eyes and I saw love


Scheme A X XAXX X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111100111011101010111111 110010110110111110010010 111010101 100111010 11101 1110001 01111111101111001 111 1101110111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 470
Words 97
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 41
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote years ago. I think I was doing a lot of reflecting at the time.

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Submitted on February 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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