Analysis of Next is Cloud



In spite of
shutting my both eyes
the deal with the light
has still been the same.

Prticles of dust
fly to me
from the archive of effort.

Facing each other
at their leisure...
so much at ease.

Still so much of fear
in the imagery?

Where do all the footsteps of queries
get lost in the seedy fog?

Only the frame is shattered
when the eyesight's path
turns to the sky.

The more ond turns pages
the more fingers caressed by clouds.


Scheme XXXX XAX BBC XA CX XXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 011 10111 01101 11101 111 111 101110 10110 1110 1111 11111 00100 11101110 1100101 1001110 1011 1101 011110 01100111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 440
Words 102
Sentences 8
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 2, 2, 3, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 48
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

A poem penned at a winter night to bring out the struggle of love and living

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Written on January 15, 2021

Submitted by mitprat on January 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Pratik Mitra

Pratik Mitra is from Konnagar, West Bengal, India. A teacher by profession, he writes both in Bengali and in English. Besides writing, he's fond of reading, films, cricket and chess. more…

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