Analysis of The Change

Drastic 2003 (Cape Town)



Joe was a boy that had zero fears
He would jump from the roof to pool with his peers,
Skate fast down the hill so till the wind gave him tears,
I even heard he once juggled spears

He was a boy who just didn't care
He was brave or dumb whichever one you fair
He even threw stones at houses, I saw him, I swear
He could stare holes in your chest with that menacing and glare

But out of the blue he started to change
No longer was he weird no longer was he deranged
There was no banging at night which to me was strange
But I soon came to love this noisy-kid-exchange

One day as I tried to go sleep
I heard a distant shout, "Absorption complete"
Opened my curtain and saw Joe standing in the street
With black ooze rolling down his face as he weeps

"What can I do" I didn't know
I opened my door and left real slow
I couldn't tell whether he was a friend or foe
Until I looked him in the eyes and saw no Joe.


Scheme AAXA BBBB CXCC XDDX EEEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 110111101 11110111111 111011101111 110111101 110111101 11111010111 1101111011111 11110111110001 1110111011 1101111101101 111101111111 111111110101 11111111 11010101001 1011001110001 11110111111 11111101 110110111 110110110111 011110010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 909
Words 193
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 141
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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Written on February 06, 2022

Submitted by Drastic on February 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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