Analysis of releases



hardships, miseries, knives, fights,
a man tries to avoid them,
yet they come, and yet they stay.

a man tries to uproot them,
hoping for them to go away,
yet they come again,
yet the time is again the same.

time flies, he uproots,
they grow again he tries to live with them,
and it's not so sane.

then, something comes by,
releases him from pain,
it's flying, it's calm, he knows it's temporary still it feels good,
still it feels calm.

there was never a need to uproot,
to resist all he needed was a calming release,
and a hope, that it isn't temporary,
that it comes again.


Scheme ABC BCDX ABE XEXX XXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 1010011 0111011 1110111 0111011 10111101 11101 10110101 1111 1101111111 01111 11011 010111 110111111001111 1111 111001101 1011110101001 0011110100 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 592
Words 130
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3, 4, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

We all have faced miseries, and we have tried to overcome them, and we (mostly) have failed. Now, do we even care about solving problems? We care about forgetting about them, searching for ways to indulge our mind somewhere. Hoping that the ways we found to indulge our mind somewhere, stay for long.

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Written on February 13, 2022

Submitted by mdhiman536 on February 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mayank Dhiman

I am an (incoming) Software Engineer at Google. I like computer science, physics, and life. I write poems to ease me up. more…

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