Analysis of Broken soul To healed



Water breaks at 710am
A baby girl was born @726 am on  3/17
Six months was the first break on her soul
A concussion she didn't deserve
Feeling abandon and alone
being the only child not at home
Fighting and screaming can't catch a break
9 years later a touch
That only one man was supposed to break
Never known from this point on
 I'll be labeled broken
Feeling like a sitting duck.
Trice u this. Trice u that
Trice u have to just let it go
Two slices later my skin was broken
Blood...tears...I wanted it to be over.
If I die my favorite person will be broken
Many bandages later it was over
Papers finally signed
A breakaway from a bad spirit
Trying to fill a void
17 I signed my past over to the devil
Losing my freedom my peace and my mind
 Life came fast to me
 3 kids 7 years later
Divorced..and  again I'm broken
Single and living my best life
2 more and once again
Trying to fill a void
Once again I'm losing me
2 years of abuse
I knife. Court and 6 months in jail
I became broken again
31 weeks. Blood running
Trice u have to choose
Your son or you.
My world has broken completely
2 more failed relationships
At this point I'm done
Then comes a flashback
Clay middle school 1999
He was their ISSUE
Now it's phone calls
Unlimited love and laughs
It's 11:17 I'm standing at the door
Deciding is this it or what
9 months later
He fixing what he didn't break!
9/23/23. A broken soul will finally be healed.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,429
Words 300
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 49
Lines Amount 49
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,100
Words per stanza (avg) 276

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When I finally let things go.

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Written on January 24, 2022

Submitted by Kreations923 on January 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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