Analysis of Broken soul To healed
Latrice 1986 (Michigan)
Water breaks at 710am
A baby girl was born @726 am on 3/17
Six months was the first break on her soul
A concussion she didn't deserve
Feeling abandon and alone
being the only child not at home
Fighting and screaming can't catch a break
9 years later a touch
That only one man was supposed to break
Never known from this point on
I'll be labeled broken
Feeling like a sitting duck.
Trice u this. Trice u that
Trice u have to just let it go
Two slices later my skin was broken
Blood...tears...I wanted it to be over.
If I die my favorite person will be broken
Many bandages later it was over
Papers finally signed
A breakaway from a bad spirit
Trying to fill a void
17 I signed my past over to the devil
Losing my freedom my peace and my mind
Life came fast to me
3 kids 7 years later
Divorced..and again I'm broken
Single and living my best life
2 more and once again
Trying to fill a void
Once again I'm losing me
2 years of abuse
I knife. Court and 6 months in jail
I became broken again
31 weeks. Blood running
Trice u have to choose
Your son or you.
My world has broken completely
2 more failed relationships
At this point I'm done
Then comes a flashback
Clay middle school 1999
He was their ISSUE
Now it's phone calls
Unlimited love and laughs
It's 11:17 I'm standing at the door
Deciding is this it or what
9 months later
He fixing what he didn't break!
9/23/23. A broken soul will finally be healed.
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Metre | 10111 01011111 111011101 001011001 10010001 100101111 100101101 11001 1101110111 1011111 111010 1010101 111111 11111111 1101011110 11011110 1111100101110 10100101110 101001 01010110 101101 1111101010 1011011011 11111 1110 101110 10010111 10101 101101 1011101 1101 1110101 1011001 1110 11111 1111 11110010 11010 11111 1101 1101 11110 1111 0100101 1110101 1011111 110 11011101 0101110011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,429 |
Words | 300 |
Sentences | 13 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 49 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,100 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 276 |
About this poem
When I finally let things go.
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Written on January 24, 2022
Submitted by Kreations923 on January 25, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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