Analysis of Blest pure of old in heart



I acted a gourmand kifing  pure golds,
the Mauled  hold caused me comatose,
Like an autumn leaf knitted and tightened,
Or a sowl flawless unto which a flèche thrown,
I beseemed a macabre and later twirled a cadaver.

Some mornings rise laited my iland,
Mouled with the auntient pulchritude,
When in age I was sixth reaching seaven,
Earth so serene and moonglade on waters,
Sugared--- the past memories I  reminisced.

Lacking not joys and to turmoil we're uncouth  ,
Our father toiling daily and mom coiling around,
Now they are thawing of weariness with gray hairs,
So their strife shall be honored with the person I am,
forwhy they pour dulcet nutella on our awe sour tongues.

On many neeght's my back I rest on sopha,
when luxated and ganched from a pinnacle,
Like a stoic louned and entwined in disguise,
Downed by the poised burden relative on my back,
May blessings be the company of our parents forever.


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Poetic Form
Metre 11001111 0111110 1110110010 101101010111 11001001010010 1101111 11011 101111101 110101110 1001100101 1011011111 1010101001101 111101100111 1111110101011 1111011101101 1101111111 110110100 10101001001 110110100111 1101010011010010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 933
Words 184
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 41

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The tireless efforts made by our parents.

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Submitted by Adamuabubakarbtb on January 23, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Adamu Abubakar Bataba

My name is Adamu Abubakar Bataba. I am a metaphysical poet and I write lyrics, poetry is a fashion that later became my passion. I write poetry to express my emotions and quill the inspirations within and outwith of my ambiance. more…

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