Analysis of You Got Me Drowning

Sarah Rayan 1982 (Kuwait City)



I know a fire can't start in the sea
but you got me drowning so effortlessly

You got me drowning for your love
My heart is pounding for your love

Sea levels are rising mysteriously
as I wait for my last tears to set me free

You got me drowning for your love
My heart is pounding for your love

The waves keep getting higher
How did you start this fire

You got me drowning for your love
My heart is pounding for your love


Scheme aa BB aa BB cc BB
Poetic Form
Metre 1101011001 11111011000 11110111 11110111 1101101000 11111111111 11110111 11110111 0111010 1111110 11110111 11110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 424
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Written on January 22, 2022

Submitted by on January 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sarah Rayan

As a proud Palestinian, I protest for peaceful resolve of the conflicts inherited by my homeland, with nothing mightier than the pen. Until I meet this goal, I swim alone. Readers may find the same metaphor woven into most of my work. more…

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