Analysis of The Evil Colors of the Rainbow



The moon awakes on a cloudy summer night, humidity taking her precious time to spread out into the air, surrounding the young woman taking a seat on the cold, dry grass.
Her eyes rise up to observe the dark sky and she leans her head back accordingly.
A grin sits on her face, for all of her dreams and goals have finally been completed.
She’s warningly surrounded by the reminders of her friend’s love, her career, her wonderful fiance.
The clouds stir in the canvas of a sky, and a painted rainbow peeks itself out.
Their colors are hardly noticeable, but the uncanny mutters echo in her ears repeatedly.
Her career seems to vanish in the midst as more clouds follow suit and the rainbow pulls its way into her vision.
She falls back and hits her head roughly against the ground, however, that’s not a care to her.
Blue is fully visible and babbles away, telling unfortunate stories of husbands that cheat and lie, fiances that stalk and kill, and marriages that fall apart.
Rain begins to pour through the clouds and tugs under the skin exactly where her ring is placed, and the promise slips off eagerly.
A quiet desperate gasp escapes her lips as the clouds falls out of the sky and the rainbow paints itself on the sky fully.
Warm, sticky water soaks her fully and the dry, cold ground she once knew becomes her hell.
She stares up at her fate, and all at once, as expected, the rainbow pours down onto her and floods into her brain, spilling every negative thought imaginable onto her.
She lies on the ground stiffly as the morning sun greets her.
However, she has nothing to greet back.


Scheme ABCDEBFGHBBIGGJ
Poetic Form
Metre 0111010101010010010111101010100110100110111 01111010110110110100 011101111010111001010 1100010100101011001010001 0110010101001011011 11011010001001010100010100 001111000111110100111101010 111010110010110110110 111010001011001001011011011110101001101 1011110101100101010111001011100 01010101011011110100110110110 110101010001111110101 11110101111010011110001010110100100101000100 11101101010110 101110111
Characters 1,602
Words 303
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 84
Words per line (avg) 19
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,267
Words per stanza (avg) 289

About this poem

A young woman who is fully content with her life of going to her dream job, a nurse, and returning home happily to her fiancé who she's devoted to loving finds her whole life ruined by a cloudy night that holds a rainbow slowly peeking out.

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Written on January 17, 2022

Submitted by lucindamarie791 on January 20, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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