Analysis of My Neighbor Asked For Sugar One Day



O, my neighbor asked me for some sugar one day

I must say; I did not expect it.

On Thursday  he said

“Please, a tad of sugar, Mr. Looker,

Tis needed to bake me a cake”.

“Oh Johnny, me boy-o!”

Said me, Mr. Looker

“Well, a baker would by his own damn sugar!

Yet, since I am nice, like my wife Ms. Ponce

I’ll give you some sugar but just this once!”

Johnny walked wayward with a pound of fine sugar,

I came into my house,

The house of Looker.

On Friday morning,

The whole damn town did awake,

To have a slice of Johnny’s  good old breakfast cake.


Scheme A X X B C X B B A X B X B X C C
Poetic Form
Metre 111011111011 111111011 1111 1011101010 11011101 110111 111010 10101111110 11111111110 1111101111 101101011110 110111 01110 11010 0111101 11011111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 607
Words 142
Sentences 11
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 25
Words per stanza (avg) 7

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Submitted by MegaMan&Bass on January 19, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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