Analysis of Why can't I smile?



Why can't I smile? I quit just smiling when it was another way to show a lie. Hey I'm smiling I'm okay. When I wasn't happy or Evan close to happy. We smile and no one ask why are you smiling? What made you happy? We smile when we're uncomfortable and we smile when we should be crying.  I realized it was another lie to make others leave you alone. Me I don't smile only when I'm happy and that right now is far and between. Why lie with a smile it's not healthy to give your feelings their true avenue. So I don't smile can anyone return that smile to my lips?


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 111111110111010111011110111110101101110110111111101111011110100001111111011011010111101101111110111001111100111101111011110111011111100111111
Characters 562
Words 113
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 429
Words per line (avg) 114
Letters per stanza (avg) 429
Words per stanza (avg) 114

About this poem

The smile is it a lie or a truth why do you smile to say your happy when you're not.

Font size:
 

Written on January 11, 2022

Submitted by Lowlarr on January 11, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

36 sec read
6

Larry Lowry

Written many years never published more…

All Larry Lowry poems | Larry Lowry Books

2 fans

Discuss this Larry Lowry poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Why can't I smile?" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/117486/why-can%27t-i-smile%3F>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    3
    hours
    53
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    "I walk down the garden paths, and all the daffodils are blowing"
    A Emily Dickinson
    B Amy Lowell
    C Elizabeth Barrett Browning
    D Gwendolyn Brooks