Analysis of The Awakening

Eugene Osowski 1949 (minneapolis)




I wandered on the waterfront
Where cherry blossoms grow

And took some petals

And then, II let them go

They were so pink
That God seemed vain
And naked to my eye,

But I was gathered in His grace,

As they began to fly

And as this beauty broke above
My wonder far below, it burst
In pulsing rings of light

That set the scene aglow

The blossoms flew
In ways their own,
Then on the river fell

Like teardrops from a mother’s eyes
When children perish well.


Scheme XA X A XXB X B XXX A XXC XC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101010 110101 01110 011111 1011 1111 010111 11110011 110111 01110101 11010111 010111 110101 0101 0111 110101 1110101 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 486
Words 114
Sentences 2
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 3, 1, 1, 3, 1, 3, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 36
Words per stanza (avg) 9

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The Epiphany & Moment of Truth - Or When Children Perish Well

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Written on April 15, 2015

Submitted by EugeneOsowski on January 08, 2022

Modified on April 16, 2023

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