Analysis of Choked on Betrayal
Deidre Moline 1978 (Tulare Ca)
As the needle pierces through my flesh, I am one plunge closer to my death, as the fog rolls in and sadness subsides, my chest moves like waves in the tide, I float alone in time and space, for that hint of death that I can taste, seeking respite outside my mind, my love for you keeps me blind, your words so silent yet spoke so clear, finally at peace screaming in my ear, you took my love and threw us away, so that I can suffer every day, your wicked thoughts no longer fake, your cries for help, how many will it take, new reality shifting, no more gifting, shut the door or climb that tree, I am left behind by suicide your love swallows me.
Scheme | A |
---|---|
Poetic Form | |
Metre | 10101111111110111101100100111111001110101011111111111010111111111111111011111001110011111101101111110100111011101111111011111010111010111111110111011101 |
Characters | 647 |
Words | 127 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 1 |
Lines Amount | 1 |
Letters per line (avg) | 502 |
Words per line (avg) | 127 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 502 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 127 |
About this poem
My boyfriend died by suicide
Font size:
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Choked on Betrayal" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 30 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/117188/choked-on-betrayal>.
Discuss this Deidre Moline poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In