Analysis of California advantage



Disabled by these fools , cps , police , probation
And , all those connected .
 California advantage happens to be a big disadvantage to me.
Grateful for the little help i get , after 60 hours every two weeks, 515.00 check received ,
 Taxes and child support i pay, no pat on the backs
No good job keep it up jake.
My youngest just turned one yr old ,
And, i havent seen , purposes to keep my child away.
What to do , i pray pray pray. It goes like this .
 Lord , grant my haters freedom , to stop the unfair abuse .
Grant my enemies , perfect sight to see the unjust.
In GOD I TRUELY TRUST


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Poetic Form
Metre 010111101010 011010 01001010110101011 101010111101010011101 1001011111101 1111111 11011111 0111100111101 11111111111 11110101100101 1110001111001 01111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 593
Words 118
Sentences 10
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 442
Words per stanza (avg) 122

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Disadvantage

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Written on December 31, 2021

Submitted by jacob_y on December 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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