Analysis of The world as I see it



Got caught up in the moment
Heavens Gates opened
My smile got stolen , that one moment
To define who was the King of the moment
Money , happiness , betrayal
all thee caught up in between the lines of love
In thus we made huge mistakes
Broke young girls hearts
Invited failure , black heart sorrowful days in their lives
My apologies
Mom dad trying by all means to secure a future for me
A rascal I am I never listened ,bad boy surely I am
Tyms changing, so are pple Least not evolving , a revolution geared by technology...
my dear sister has lost her identity

Since I started being religious girls condemn me... now I see what they wear as law breaking

Liquor substance abuse...
how do the stats get reduced
For sure teen life is a mystery, yet they is history, to stop this, yet tricky
Some tried got results...
a repeat they know it would be risky...

Covid , gave birth to unwanted pregnancy, xul drop outs also it gave both to success....just take the chances
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With the word evolving politics is just squaring, same roots , different approach to the game still bloodshed is a common

In the house of commons laws are discussed, but are they for the best interest of the world .

We can voice out to who actually? Humans wy not think of God actually ?
We are responsible for everything , in the name of science a hidden truth abt politics injustice to the non civilized communities lives are lost everyday

Who can put a stop to this ,is it the Pentagon , NASA , Russia or the UK
Scientist or socialist ....either way who pays the prices for the suffering of us , us we pay

The world as I see it


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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,640
Words 331
Sentences 12
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 14, 1, 5, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

The world is revolving around depression, loneliness, anxiety all these need to be said out loud to avoid suicidal

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Written on October 16, 2021

Submitted by Xabawrldd on December 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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