Analysis of Tales of a lover 2



123 ..you turned into my enemy
I can't believe you made all those fake promises
Saw love in your eyes but that was just a fantasy
Took me to the dark world girl you never loved me
So much fake things about you I don't know why you accepted me
You said you love me but where you at
All those don't call me now now I understand
Shawty you are a demon broke my heart love is a game

At the realm is your hate
Darkness in my mind your face seems to fade
All the I love you one two they went
Now u get it girl you are mad
Crazely attached to the monarch of heartbreaks
I don't wanna lie you made me feel insane
I remember dreaming Paris
Paris dreams fade
Look at me I'm going I remember you said
Shawty you said you would never leave me
Didn't know it was a lie it's a heartbreak I was seeking
Intro to my homies they warned me before
They said I should leave you while l still had the chance
Love is suicidal...shawty you are good with pretence

All the one word answers are really paying off
You always said you are too busy with the other niggas I guess
My heart is in disorder you left it in a mess
But why did you do it I miss you sleeping on my chest
All the crazy visits you made me smile when I was sad
Wish this demon could really go to hell
Shawty I hate you don't wanna see your face
Don't try me in the future now I'm really tense

Your last words I remember
You said I love you in a gesture
Now you love a rapper
Shawty you are a murder
This is for you


Scheme ABAAAXXX XCXDXXXCXAXXXB XEEXDXXX FFFFX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011100 110111111100 1101111110100 111011111011 1111011111110101 111111111 1111111101 1110101111101 101111 1001111111 101111111 11111111 10110111 11101111101 10101010 1011 111110101011 111111011 10111011011110 1011111101 111111111101 11111111 101110110101 111111101010111 1110010111001 11111111110111 10101011111111 1110110111 1111110111 111001011101 1111010 111110010 111010 111010 1111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,491
Words 339
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 14, 8, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 285
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

This followers another sinister heartbreak from the girl he loved as though he couldn't breath without her

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Written on December 21, 2021

Submitted by Loner on December 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:44 min read
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Stephen jnr Zaba

Stephen jnr Zaba also known as Lone Walker is a poet whose poetry was inspired by lyrical content from the late rapper juice wrld .He started writing at the age of 13 , in his first year at high school.His poetry is more on depression, anxiety, broken hearts,politics and general events of life .On YouTube his work is found on xaba wrld poems. more…

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