Analysis of Invisible Ink



Before the writing,
collecting memories
silent endowments
 pages without lines

Before the writing,
I traveled a dreamer
imagining truant
what tomorrow defines

Before the writing,
the words clouded over
passing in bunches
like birds on the wing

Before the writing,
the wind was my compass
direction e’er changing
intention to sing

Before the writing,
my spirit a bachelor
no phrases to husband
no verses to wed

Before the writing,
immersed in tomorrow
my freedom untethered
—to go where it led

(Dreamsleep: December, 2021)


Scheme Axxb Acdb Acxa Axaa Acxe Axde c
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 01010 010100 10010 10011 01010 110010 010010 10101 01010 011010 10010 11101 01010 011110 010110 01011 01010 1100100 110110 11011 01010 01001 1101 11111 1010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 532
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted by sage48 on December 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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