Analysis of In our meeting place



As I close my eyes to sleep,one thing I knows for sure,
That as I drift off to dream you'll b there waiting for me,as u have been so many times before,
U will take my hand leading the way,down the same paths now as their families they've become,fields of flower we wonder together,lil memories we will have for years to come....
Like walking threw lush fields of flowers among the valley,stretching as far as the eye could see,smelling the scent of the flowers on the wind,nobody around but just you and me,or wrapped n each other's arms laying n the grass,getting lost n the others eyes,not wanting our time the come to a end,to us there's no such thing as good-byes.....
A world only we r part of our very own Lil excape  and retreat,existing only n our dreams each night,our only place to go and meet,overcome and defiedthe odds,careful of the obstacles that where ment for us,meeting every ight there n our Lil place that's ours,being there nightly for us is a must.....
Nobody else shall walk those valleys,see it's beauty or feel the chill of it's wind,only we know it's wonders and beautifulness,we try to soak up before it comes it a end
It's grass never will b walked by no other but us,we've come to know every inch by heart,so we can remember each color,every smell,to help us to remember each and every part........
The time has come my love once again for us to go,to reality we must now return,but I promise to meet u here again,same place ,same time I will return here to b with you,meeting each other as we do every night,and will continue   each night to do............


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Characters 1,586
Words 322
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 153
Words per line (avg) 36
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,220
Words per stanza (avg) 289

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Written for my beautiful wife.

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Written on February 20, 2018

Submitted by Childerschad4 on December 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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