Analysis of I'm falling for a spider lily



A spider lily kisses my lips,
perfume so sickly,
impossible to resist.

"Temptation is the devil" I cry,
& throw it off the ledge.

The petals call out my name,
they know I yearn for them.

Overcome by subservience,
I feel compelled to obey,
the orders of the flower that sways.

I'm falling for a spider lily.

It's illogical to obey.
There's no reason to be servile.

Forgoing my task is fulfilling,
yet servitude feels divine.

I reach out a hand to grasp its beauty,
the allure life will never match.

I've fallen for a spider lily.


Scheme XAX XX XX XBX A BX XX AX A
Poetic Form
Metre 010101011 01110 0100101 010101011 11101 0101111 111111 1010100 1101101 010101011 110101010 10100101 11101110 010111010 110101 1110111110 00111101 110101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 536
Words 122
Sentences 10
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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Submitted by xomanahilox on December 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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