Analysis of Thinking near my bedroom door!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)



Standing near my bedroom door, I hear a whisper deep within my walls!
Slowly, silently, I won't answer!
Quiet no riots, what could that be?
My own self, I answer!
It's night in private I see her smiling! Grinding in bed with me until, weak! Minutes hours days years go by, I still won't ignore it!
True, I love it!
The whispers that say you're amazing!
My song on the radio life!
She's still playing!
Reliant loving gentle and kind!
Peaceful, a new melody!
My equal, there is no settling! Inspiration starts within!
Alone, I sit with my spark!
Love is that gift!
Swift, no words or money could ever compare!
To the time alone when we are dreaming on an island!
Elevation from the fair!
It's clear I adore mi amore she's life and I love her in truth!
The whispers in the wind will always be new!
My life my guide, my advocate and friend! My sister my mother my wife my daughter and then!
Infinitely forever you will feel when it's real!
Love in the wind!
Her thoughts, my mind will just heal! DevonBates2021©️


Scheme ABCBDDEFEGCHIJKLKMNOPGA
Poetic Form
Metre 1011111101010111 101001110 101101111 111110 110101101010011101110101111111011 1111 010111010 1110101 1110 010101001 1001100 110111100010101 0111111 1111 11111011001 10101111101110 010101 1110111011011001 0100011111 11111100011101101111001 1000010111111 1001 01111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,032
Words 209
Sentences 28
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 771
Words per stanza (avg) 187

About this poem

Illustrative explanation of my thoughts in time!

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Written on December 08, 2021

Submitted by devonb7 on December 08, 2021

Modified by devonb7 on December 08, 2021

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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