Analysis of Thinking near my bedroom door!
Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)
Standing near my bedroom door, I hear a whisper deep within my walls!
Slowly, silently, I won't answer!
Quiet no riots, what could that be?
My own self, I answer!
It's night in private I see her smiling! Grinding in bed with me until, weak! Minutes hours days years go by, I still won't ignore it!
True, I love it!
The whispers that say you're amazing!
My song on the radio life!
She's still playing!
Reliant loving gentle and kind!
Peaceful, a new melody!
My equal, there is no settling! Inspiration starts within!
Alone, I sit with my spark!
Love is that gift!
Swift, no words or money could ever compare!
To the time alone when we are dreaming on an island!
Elevation from the fair!
It's clear I adore mi amore she's life and I love her in truth!
The whispers in the wind will always be new!
My life my guide, my advocate and friend! My sister my mother my wife my daughter and then!
Infinitely forever you will feel when it's real!
Love in the wind!
Her thoughts, my mind will just heal! DevonBates2021©️
Scheme | ABCBDDEFEGCHIJKLKMNOPGA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1011111101010111 101001110 101101111 111110 110101101010011101110101111111011 1111 010111010 1110101 1110 010101001 1001100 110111100010101 0111111 1111 11111011001 10101111101110 010101 1110111011011001 0100011111 11111100011101101111001 1000010111111 1001 01111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,032 |
Words | 209 |
Sentences | 28 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 23 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 771 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 187 |
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Illustrative explanation of my thoughts in time!
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