Analysis of Energy!



Practice, makes perfect!
I search, within!
Who, are we, to judge?
We all, have, our rain, and, our sun!
Fun?
Achieving,is seeking, and, disagreeing!
Proving, learning, earning!
In the winter, create, a summer!
You should, not wonder!
I write, my own, lines!
I found, my own time!
Releasing, the negative, mind!
Bright beams, of light!
Real trees, true starts, no fights!
Rainbows, in diffrent, shades!
Colors, that shine, eternal, in our mind!
The sky, is not, to high, I see, still, not blind!
Stars, are infinite, I treasure, forever, my existence, relentless!
Gifted, alone I speak, thoughts, are deep!
The ocean, is coasting!
As, blue as it's notice!
We all, should stay, focused!
I notice, the quiet!
The work, and no lying!
That's trying!
Currency earned, I'm fine then!
A new, thought, to climb in!
Life, is kindness!
DevonTBates©️2021


Scheme ABCDDEEFFGHIJKLIIMNEOPQEERBOG
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1101 11111 1111010101 1 11000010 101010 001001010 11110 11111 11111 01001001 1111 111111 1011 10110100101 01111111111 111001100101010010 100111111 010110 111110 111110 110010 010110 110 1001111 011110 1110 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 850
Words 169
Sentences 29
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 619
Words per stanza (avg) 139

About this poem

A true speech in truth about life! Things learned and lived!

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Written on December 08, 2021

Submitted by devonb7 on December 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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