Analysis of Gallows



There's at least one person in this building who's plotting their government takeover
There's at least one person in this building who will become a star
There's at least one person in this building who wishes to burn the world
And that person is me

There's at least one person in this building who wants to kill all blacks
There's at least one person in this building who wants to kill all whites
There's at least one person in this building who wants to be killed
And that person is me

Because as ash floats in the wind
And smoke billows into my lungs
I'll dance, feet off the ground
Aand while the gallows begin to burn below me
I'll take my first and last flight
Leaving behind the shriveled remains of a broken world
The ashes of a child

The fire dies
And the crows come then
Sorting through the ashes
Growing in number; building their empire in the skulls of buildings
In the bones of civilization
And who will be there to see the iron age of the crows
Just the ash and scorched gallows of a child's dream left untouched
Standing silent
Looming reminders of the brutality of those long passed


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111100110110110010 1111100110110101 11111001101101101 011011 1111100110111111 1111100110111111 111110011011111 011011 01111001 01100111 111101 110100111011 1111011 10010100110101 010101 0101 00111 101010 10010101100001110 00110010 01111110101101 10101101011101 1010 100101001001111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,101
Words 207
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 7, 9
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 221
Words per stanza (avg) 51

About this poem

Almost stream of consciousness about destruction of the world, TW for suicide

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Written on December 02, 2021

Submitted by on December 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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