Analysis of THE MAN WITH THE ONE SIDED COIN

Audrey Richards 1955 (Los Angeles)



I heard the sound of machinery
that brings him near my door
my heart is pounding my body trembling
over this impossible situation that I abhore
there's a hole in the roof
a hot water heater he refuses to let us install
it's his kingdom, after all and we are goofs
but he moans and complains
a mouth as big as a vault, everything remains our fault
our pain we adjoin
living with the man who holds the one - sided coin


Scheme ABCADEFGHII
Poetic Form
Metre 110110100 111111 11110110100 1010100010111 101001 011010101011101 11101010111 111001 01111011001101 101101 101011101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 421
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 330
Words per stanza (avg) 82

About this poem

this poem is about the cruelty perpetrated by a cruel and irrational man upon people he seemingly thinks he has control over.

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Written on November 23, 2021

Submitted by GypsyGreenEyes48 on November 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Audrey Richards

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