Analysis of When you're Hurting
WHEN YOU’RE HURTING
LOOK UP
The first time I experienced hurt, was at a very young age
It was the time when I was supposed to be protected
I was not taught to protect myself; I was taught to look up, be strong
The days of crying so hard, I thought I would never heal from the pain
I was told weeping would endure for today but tomorrow I’d see sunshine
When I look up
The hurt and pain was etched in my soul, so deep that I didn’t know what happiness looked like
It seemed never ending
As I tried to heal from one hurt, three to four more hurts came upon me, more devastating than the first. I would just do as I was taught, look up
Never understood why I was taught to look up, what was up there for me to be looking up
It felt like the more I looked up, the more hurting I would suffer
Today I completely understand why I was being told to look up
What they didn’t tell me to do was
Look up and call on God for healing of the hurt
Now when I look up, I say Thank you God, for never leaving me or forsaking me
When I’m hurting today, I just look up and say a prayer of Thanksgiving
Scheme | AB XXXXXBXABBXBXXXA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110 11 0111010011101011 11011110111010 1111101111111111 01110111111101101 11110101101101111 1111 010111011111111110011 111010 1111111111111101111001011111111111 1001111111111111111101 1110111101101110 01101001111101111 11111111 110111110101 111111111111010110101 11100111110101110 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,095 |
Words | 226 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 16 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 12 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 420 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 112 |
About this poem
It's about letting go and Trusting God will never leave nor forsake you.
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Written on November 19, 2021
Submitted by seasome on November 19, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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