Analysis of When you're Hurting




WHEN YOU’RE HURTING
LOOK UP

The first time I experienced hurt, was at a very young age
It was the time when I was supposed to be protected
I was not taught to protect myself; I was taught to look up, be strong
The days of crying so hard, I thought I would never heal from the pain
I was told weeping would endure for today but tomorrow I’d see sunshine
When I look up
The hurt and pain was etched in my soul, so deep that I didn’t know what happiness looked like
It seemed never ending
As I tried to heal from one hurt, three to four more hurts came upon me, more devastating than the first. I would just do as I was taught, look up
Never understood why I was taught to look up, what was up there for me to be looking up
It felt like the more I looked up, the more hurting I would suffer
Today I completely understand why I was being told to look up
What they didn’t tell me to do was
Look up and call on God for healing of the hurt
Now when I look up, I say Thank you God, for never leaving me or forsaking me
When I’m hurting today, I just look up and say a prayer of Thanksgiving


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11 0111010011101011 11011110111010 1111101111111111 01110111111101101 11110101101101111 1111 010111011111111110011 111010 1111111111111101111001011111111111 1001111111111111111101 1110111101101110 01101001111101111 11111111 110111110101 111111111111010110101 11100111110101110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,095
Words 226
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 16
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 420
Words per stanza (avg) 112

About this poem

It's about letting go and Trusting God will never leave nor forsake you.

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Written on November 19, 2021

Submitted by seasome on November 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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ElsieMarie Mitchell

I'm an Executive Assistant in Downtown Newark NJ, I'm a college graduate and I hold my NJ RE license and Notary License. I love to read, write poems/short stories, paint and listen to Jazz/ Classic R & B. more…

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