Analysis of Annie

Douglas H. Mc Clintock 1934 (Sarnia, Ontario)



I once knew an old lady names Annie,
She was in a class by herself.
Always dressed in black, what a grannie,
Lived out in the country by herself !

Her favorite book was the black Bible
Taught me many things I never knew.
Walked straight without a wobble,
In her ninety's no cane, a proper lady of years ago.

A neat little house she lived in
No indoor plumbing or electric things,
An outhouse with newspaper to wipe within,
A potty for wintertime, made in England !

She wore black high boots to her knees
White blouse with a purple kerchief.
With oil lamps with a wick to read
She was self made, the old fashion way !

Listen my friend, this is not a made up story,
I have her ceramic potty and two oil lamps
Of an era gone by, no radio, or tv to be a bore.
It was the little things in life, like reading your Bible !

We all meet many people in life,
Some good, bad, sad, take your pick,
But knowing Granma Smith
Made me richer than you will ever be !


Scheme ABAB CXCX DXDX XXXX AXXC XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110110 11001101 1101101 110010101 0100110110 111011101 1101010 001011010101101 01101110 111010101 111101101 0101101010 11111101 11101010 11110111 111101101 101111101110 110010100111 1110111101111101 11010101110110 111101001 1111111 11011 1110111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 957
Words 209
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 32

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An antique lady

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Written on November 13, 2021

Submitted by Dougla$Irishman on November 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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