Analysis of Ode to the Flu

Kennet Benoît-Hutchins 1952 (Snowdon, Montreal, QC)



I awaken to mucus muttering
A sinus echo of heartbeats
Sleep eludes the fatigue
Royale tasked agents fail
Spittle production increases
Drip echo drip echo drip
This war, ware, this war
Ban Ki-moon rescue me
For I need peace, rest
I am awake. Awake.

Kennet Benoît-Hutchins
November 2010


Scheme XXXXXXXXXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010110100 0101011 101001 011101 10010010 1101101 11111 111101 11111 110101 11011 010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 289
Words 52
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 24

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Ahh, the malfeasance of influenza.

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Submitted by Kennet on November 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kennet Benoît-Hutchins

A Canadian ambulatory Homo sapiens male, who muses and just sometimes, remembers to make note of a verse or two. Unionist with Unifor, accident adjudicator. Runs amok with words, occasionally coherent. more…

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