Analysis of Lighting and fire!



Mezmorizing ways!
Love that won't misbehave!
Peace without war!
Truth without scores!
The breath in my air!
As long as she's there!
My sun in the sky!
My wind beneath time!
In the end I still love!
Truth she still hugs!
Not falling life calling!
Floating drifting flying no stalling!
The sky was red blue yellow purple gold!
Pink red orange yesterday in the cold!
Growing old warmth I hold!
Believing in love life the above!
At peace with myself!
Plaques aren't my best!
I love her endlessly!
Care how she feels!
Watch her as she sleeps!
Thankful to give!
A house with our kids!
My equal and friend!
The deepest thoughts are within!
For her I would grow!
Fail get up and continue to grow!
Even until this day my destiny!
A reason to live!
Love infinitely!
Endlessly glad for you in my past!
What a world!
Tornadoes hurricanes still no place like home!
A king is no king on his throne!
Without his queen still wishing him home!
Poetry in motion violins violas harps flutes!
Right and good music and hoops!
Live I will succeed I shall!
Possessing intelligence just being a man!
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Scheme ABCDEEFGHIJJKKKHLMNOPQRSTUUNVNWXYZY1 2 3 4 A
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 11 11101 1011 1011 01011 11111 11001 11011 001111 1111 110110 101010110 0111110101 111010001 101111 010011001 1111 11011 110100 1111 10111 1011 011101 11001 0101101 10111 111001011 1001111100 01011 11000 100111011 101 0101011111 01111111 011111011 10001000101011 1011001 1110111 010010011001 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,096
Words 235
Sentences 40
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 40
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 853
Words per stanza (avg) 196

About this poem

A reflection of life time and love!

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Written on November 06, 2021

Submitted by devon_b on November 06, 2021

Modified by devon_b on November 08, 2021

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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