Analysis of My gorgeous Queen



Like pirates symbol – “brigantine“
Has taste for alife and dead, –
Love is the same as a guillotine –
Both take off someone’s head.

Perfection shouldn’t be modest
And confident ex-teen,
She knows, she is a goddess,
My fresh and gorgeous Queen!

You scanned my eyes and I believe
For you, it wouldn’t be news, -
I want to taste you everywhere,
To swell your labia's juice!

You couldn’t give me everything,
But you’re a precious pearl,
When guaranteeing just a couple of things -
The pretty boy or girl!


Scheme ABAB XAXA XXXX XCXC
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 110101 111101 11011010 11111 0101110 010011 1111010 110101 11110101 111111 1111110 11111 111110 110101 1010101011 010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 507
Words 91
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on 2001

Submitted by leorozum on November 05, 2021

Modified on April 22, 2023

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Leonid Rozumenko

Someone in your domain asks me to send a letter about myself. My pleasure - favorite topic. Who am I? Can’t keep a secret - athletic, open-minded, and generous, with a wide scope, love for women, good company. With love for science and to write something everlasting, which isn’t computer programming anymore. I was born in gorgeous Kyiv (Ukraine) more than 35 years ago, lived in the USA for longer than 4 years and my language is still in progress. My poetry is also a colorful picture of the unseeing battle between “yours truly” and English grammar. My Ukrainian or Russian accent has two unreliable reasons – it’s “for fun” and “hard to get rid of”. The meaning of my last name “Rozumenko” in Ukrainian is very close to “jaba-jaba a dada” in “Crocodile Dundee II”. I have several other weaknesses but I introduce them only to my closest friends. Yours truly, Leo Rozumenko more…

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