Analysis of Can I try



Can I try
To become you friend
You can’t live  alone
You can’t live in Isolation
You can’t live without friends
You need somebody like me to
Become you friend
You can trust me
I will never hurt you
I will try to do everything I can
To make you happy
I am not laying to  you
I will never put you down
Or hurt you
We will built firs a strong bond
Can I ask you something
What do you believe in ?
You got to believe in something
I hope you be honest and tell me
If you don’t believe in God understand
That is you choice
But i am telling you the truth
It was God that made you in his image
And if it wasn’t for God
You would not exist
Also God gave you
A beautiful life
So just live you life
That God gave
Is white life that matters
I must tell you
That I am not friend of a black
Person
And all my friends are white people
I feel that would be the worst thing
I could do for me
The black people have
No respect for people
My friends are not rich
They are poor people
And I Just love
My friends
Also they have a limited amount
of money to live
And they are very God to me


Scheme ABCDEFBGFHGFIFJKLKGMNOPQRFSSTUFVDWKGXWYWZE1 2 G
Poetic Form Tetractys  (38%)
Metre 111 10111 11101 1110010 111011 1110111 0111 1111 111011 111111011 11110 1111011 1110111 111 1111011 111110 111010 11101010 111110011 111010101 1111 11110101 1111110110 011111 11101 10111 01001 11111 111 111110 1111 11111101 10 01111110 11111011 11111 01101 101110 11111 11110 0111 11 1011010001 11011 01110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,036
Words 227
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 45
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 832
Words per stanza (avg) 230

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That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Written on November 05, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas378 on November 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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