Analysis of Envy

Sumer Cannon 1982 (California)



You put on a mask
As if it just some average task
Portraying yourself to be
Someone you could turn to when in time of need
When In fact you are a bad seed

Not knowing how to celebrate another persons win
Only able to justify your own sin
One more friendship into the trash bin

Seeing you for who you truly are is definitely going to leave a scar
That’s ok I refuse to cry in my brand new car
Instead I’ll wish on a shooting star
May everyone see you for who you truly are!


Scheme AAXBB CCC DDDD
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111111001 0100111 1111110111 10111011 1101110010101 1010110111 111001011 10111110111000101101 1111011101111 011110101 11011111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 473
Words 97
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

Was written as a form of therapy at the ending of a close friendship

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Written on October 29, 2021

Submitted by Sumer on November 02, 2021

Modified by Sumer on November 02, 2021

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Sumer Cannon

I use writing as a form of therapy. I have taken no classes and have very little knowledge about poetry, outside of knowing that I love it. I’ve been doing this off and on since I was in jr high school more…

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