Analysis of "Did I Say I Would"



Did I say I would
As I watched the falling sparrow
Was it I who promised
To stop the piercing arrow
Oh but he lies so cold and still

It's late to begin, so late
Many cannot see the danger there

Did I say I would
Perhaps it was a dream
Someone gave me the silver thread
To sow shut the human seam
To Earth fell my soaring will

But if I hurry; make haste
I will avoid the judge's killing stare

Did I say I would
My words I cannot recall
How could I let it be
If I was to become the all
Claiming forever the scared hill

I laugh, my fellows with me
We all fell the trapper's snare

Did I say I would
My friends with finger condemn
As my eyes blur
The light, once bright grows dim
The wind, once warm blows Winter's chill

And I alone I'm left to find
What little peace in a traitor's mind.


Scheme Abxbc xd Aexec xd Afgfc gd Axxxc hh
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11101010 111110 1101010 11111101 1110111 101010101 11111 011101 1110101 1110101 1111101 1111011 1101010101 11111 111101 111111 11110101 10010011 1111011 111011 11111 1111001 1111 011111 01111101 01011111 11010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 757
Words 163
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 5, 2, 5, 2, 5, 2
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Written in 1977 after leaving home for the first time and escaping the pedophile for the first time.

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Written on January 02, 1977

Submitted by albertlavallee on October 28, 2021

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Albert A. Lavallee

Grew up in rural Oklahoma. Was sold by my parents to a pedophile for land at age 8 along with my brother age 10. more…

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