Analysis of Under the sky



I waited for hours
Sittin on the swing
Under the sky,
Only in the stars light
Got a feeling you were there ,
Didn't saw you anywhere.

I waited for hours
For you to come
And abruptly,
The cold breeze hit me
But I didn't shivered this time,
I hugged myself
Like you were embracing me tight.

You sung the swan song in my ears
I closed my eyes throwing away all my fears.
Hours passed like seconds,
You left me alone with my thoughts
And now,
I miss the fragrance that you left on my soul.

I waited for hours again today
In a belief in my heart to feel you again
I sit on the same swing
Under the sky
In a little bit moon light.


Scheme AbCdee Axffxxd ggxxxx xxbCd
Poetic Form
Metre 110110 1101 1001 100011 1010101 101110 110110 1111 0010 01111 11101011 111 11001011 11011011 11111001111 101110 11101111 01 11010111111 1101100101 000101111101 111011 1001 0010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 616
Words 127
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 6, 5
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 121
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted by yadavpinki8376 on October 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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