Analysis of Please
Lord take me from this place.
Keep me warm keep me safe.
Save me from all this hate.
Clean this load off my plate.
All this pain I cannot take.
This really can't be my fate.
Living life at my pace.
Sober living am I too late?
Flooding feelings i feel irrate.
Blown up mind that won't deflate.
Peace of mind I can't create.
Addiction will kill me at this rate.
I pray to god and ask him why.
Why did I leave this life?
I can't I have a wife?
I really don't believe the hype.
My brightest day is your darkest night.
Am I wrong or am I right?
Scars so deep from this fight.
Opened eyes can't see the light.
Lose my battle lose my sight.
I dig deep to find the might.
I must be wowned to tight.
Scheme | AXBBXBABBBBB XCCXDDDDDDD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 111111 111111 111111 1111101 1101111 101111 10101111 1010111 1111101 1111101 010111111 11110111 111111 111101 11010101 110111101 1111111 111111 1011101 1110111 1111101 111111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 678 |
Words | 142 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 12, 11 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 260 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 71 |
About this poem
This is a poem I wrote about my battle with Addiction.
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Written on October 11, 2021
Submitted by reedtrisler402 on October 24, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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