Analysis of Desculpa



Desculpa
My father
For all the bad things
I had down a long time
But father
Remember that I am not
Perfect father
And I will never be
Father I feel guilty
For doing the bad things
I have done long time ago
Also father you made me
The way I am
Father I never asked
You to put me un this
World
Also this world is a crazy
World
There is no peace in the world
Ovreseas
Yes father
Brutal war is going on
In the world
I think that me and the
Rest of people
Have enough of the war
Where there is no clean
Water to dink
And the people
Drink that dirty water
Desculpa my father
Many years ago
I had to walk to road to hell
And everybodies road to hell
Is different
Desculpa
My father
You gave me feelings
Inside of my heart
And that feelings
Makes me feel good
Desculpa
My father
You made me
Into the human being
I am
And you made me
With you holy hands
To be a disable men
Desculpa
I already got use
Being a human being
Desculpa
My father
After you made me
With you holy hands
You had placed me
Here to live
And I just to live
Here on earth
And also I must
Tell you father
That I just love
To live here on earth
Desculpa
My father
I have some good friends
That treat me with respect me
They respect my race and religion
And I respect also
My friends race and religion
Desculpa my father
It is getting late already
I must go to bed now
Because I am already tired
Yes father I hope
That I get a good sleep tonight
Desculpa
My father
I know that you love me
Without limits
And I also love you
My father


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Poetic Form
Metre 1 110 11011 111011 110 0101111 0110 011101 101110 110011 1111101 1010111 0111 101101 111111 1 10111010 1 1111001 1 110 1011101 001 111100 1110 101101 11111 1011 0010 111010 1110 10101 11111111 01111 1100 1 110 11110 01111 0110 1111 1 110 111 0101010 11 0111 11101 1100101 1 101011 1001010 1 110 10111 11101 1111 111 01111 111 01011 1110 1111 11111 1 110 11111 1111011 101110010 010110 1110010 1110 11101010 111111 011101010 11011 11101101 1 110 111111 0110 011011 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,416
Words 309
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 83
Lines Amount 83
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,183
Words per stanza (avg) 309

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That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Written on October 21, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas378 on October 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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