Analysis of Mother of Exiles



Dear Mother of Exiles
Your attempt at taking in the exiled
has failed
many lost, many found
the found are now lost
and the lost have found
power in degrading others
Others with different colors
of skin and hair and eyes
others whom were once scared
now terrified even under
your rule

mother who really rules?
Is it you
or the powerful white male figures
who torment and torture
those of other races
and genders and types
those who need help seek light
only to find dark in the promised safety
only to find the lost still lost
and the found are found jumping off cliffs in pain

Mother, what have we done?
We have let the rich and powerful take us
take our huddled masses made safe
take them and scare them
Make the once un-oppressed oppressed
make the many shapes of humanity unseen
make them scared to be seen

Mother, what happened?
We say we are fine,
Our military sure is.
But inside our schools are
crumbling just like the students
We now are the huddled masses
Can you see us?

Mother where are you now?
When the Hispanics, Latinos, queers, and Asians need you?
You say you stand tall
Do you look at our many states?
Tennessee, Texas,
Louisiana, and Alabama?
No!
 you only stand blind
blind to our pain
blind to our life


Scheme XXXABACCXXDX XECDFXXXBG XHXXXII XXXXXFH XEXXHXXXGX
Poetic Form
Metre 11011 101110001 11 101101 01111 00111 10001010 10110010 110101 101011 1101010 11 101101 111 101001110 11010 111010 01001 111111 10111001010 10110111 00111101101 101111 11101010011 110101011 11011 10110101 101011010001 111111 10110 11111 1010011 1011011 10011010 11101010 1111 101111 10010010101011 11111 111110101 0110 00100010 1 11011 11101 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,178
Words 227
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 12, 10, 7, 7, 10
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 195
Words per stanza (avg) 45

About this poem

It is a piece based upon the Statue of Liberty in the United States.

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Written on June 04, 2016

Submitted by victoriamdays on October 21, 2021

Modified on March 17, 2023

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