Analysis of Breaking heart
Lana tbatou 1962 (Bloomington)
My heart is broken and torn in two
I really don’t know what I’m suppose to do
This fighting and arguing is no fun at all
All I can do is sit on the floor and bawl
I’m trying so hard to build us a life you see
I really want you to just be with me
I want to hold you in my arms
Show you the love I have and all it’s charms
I can’t bare the thought of letting you go
If so my heart will only have a big hole
My heart beats for no other man
For this I can’t pretend
I love you more than you could ever know
So please I’m begging you don’t let go
I’m not like other woman
I’ve opened my heart up I’ve tried to love again
I know your pain you feel inside
I feel it too, sometimes I wanna die
Oh how, can god be so cruel
Oh how I wish you could love me too
I want I need no other man
Oh this, yes this I can’t pretend
My heart, yes it belongs , it belongs to you
It’s breaking and torn right in two
I want I need no other man
It’s you babe , it’s you I can not pretend
I want to make a life with you
I want you, I need you, I think you do too
I sit, I wait and I pray the day will come
You will come to your senses and we will be as one
I want you, i need you so don’t let me go
I can’t live with a heart that has such a big hole
Why can’t you see your all I want, your all I need
Please darling here my cries
Let me love you before I die....
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111100101 11011110111 110010011111 11111110101 110111110111 1101111111 11111011 1101110111 1110111011 11111101011 11111101 111101 1111111101 111101111 1111010 110111111101 11111101 1111011101 11111110 111111111 11111101 11111101 11110110111 11001101 11111101 1111111101 11110111 11111111111 11110110111 1111110011111 11111111111 111101111011 111111111111 110111 11110111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,346 |
Words | 304 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 35 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 997 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 306 |
About this poem
The words speak for it really. The suffering one goes threw
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Written on July 08, 2020
Submitted by Michell_40 on October 20, 2021
Modified on April 14, 2023
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