Analysis of Breaking heart

Lana tbatou 1962 (Bloomington)



My heart is broken and torn in two
I really don’t know what I’m suppose to do
This fighting and arguing is no fun at all
All I can do is sit on the floor and bawl
I’m trying so hard to build us a life you see
I really want you to just be with me
I want to hold you in my arms
Show you the love I have and all it’s charms
I can’t bare the thought of letting you go
If so my heart will only have a big hole
My heart beats for no other man
For this I can’t pretend
I love you more than you could ever know
So please I’m begging you don’t let go
I’m not like other woman
I’ve opened my heart up I’ve tried to love again
I know your pain you feel inside
I feel it too, sometimes I wanna die
Oh how, can god be so cruel
Oh how I wish you could love me too
I want I need no other man
Oh this, yes this I can’t pretend
My heart, yes it belongs , it belongs to you
It’s breaking and torn right in two
I want I need no other man
It’s you babe , it’s you I can not pretend
I want to make a life with you
I want you, I need you, I think you do too
I sit, I wait and I pray the day will come
You will come to your senses and we will be as one
I want you, i need you so don’t let me go
I can’t live with a heart that has such a big hole
Why can’t you see your all I want, your all I need
Please darling here my cries
Let me love you before I die....


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,346
Words 304
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 997
Words per stanza (avg) 306

About this poem

The words speak for it really. The suffering one goes threw

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Written on July 08, 2020

Submitted by Michell_40 on October 20, 2021

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Lana tbatou

I love writing poetry. Expressing my feelings and pains of different events in my life. I love singing, cooking and the great outdoors. I’m passionate and romantic and believe in love. more…

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