Analysis of Undiluted affinity



Dost thou seeketh me in the bowels of darkness?
Dost thou get burdened to death by the craving for love?
Thou climbest the mountain summit and dive to the oceans deep.
The pain of perseverance as you hunger and thirst, with weary feet.

But what comparest to the power of love?
When sacrifice isn't regarded amiss
And the bliss afterwards saturates thy soul.

If I ever find a more greater peace,
I pray in love we all will grow.


Scheme XAXX AXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 11110010110 1111011101011 11010100110101 0110101110011101 111101011 1101001001 001100111 1110101101 11011111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 427
Words 79
Sentences 7
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

Mid-morning while sitting on a chair at the front porch, having the dry air caress everything in its path. Yet in that moment of thick silence, the only thing that flashes as one lays down on the rocking chair with eyes closed is that which convicts us. Because trapped in our mind are thoughts that no one can fathom, and jailed in our heats are emotions that couldn't be expressed, especially that which is generally poised at the activities of individuals. Hence, love is the ultimate, and the extremes one takes to attain that which is of high value to him or her is really an enigmatic feeling. The thrive, sacrifice and the heart breaking response. But the truth is that love is mutual, although everyone sees love differently, the prayer is for a undivided affinity for each other. The peace and happiness afterwards saturates thy soul and the breath of fresh air, as the sun rays rest on earth, completes everything on a winter morning. Nothing compares to this, not in all of eternity. 

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Submitted by Nanribet123 on October 18, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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