Analysis of Desert Swirl.



I am brown in the lightest of ways. It seems so easy, doesn't it?
Every word revealed like an opened can!
I wish sometimes. I wish I'd never felt or seen after thoughts of the defectivest good seise me. As if remembering my mother's softest reaction to me. But she is long passed and I have learned much from her softest reaction to me. Now, I massage. I massage messages of... Yes love. Yes light blessings. But also me. My words from a language understood somehow, some swirling way into and through this fine magnificence of physical form. I am a women but inside I am stronger and more than everyone before with and beyond me, but sometimes I feel like a man.


Scheme ABB
Poetic Form Tercet 
Metre 11100101111110101 10010111101 11011111011110110111111010011010010111111101111101001011110110110011111101101111010011110101011111100111010101111001110011001110111101
Characters 661
Words 123
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
Lines Amount 3
Letters per line (avg) 173
Words per line (avg) 41
Letters per stanza (avg) 518
Words per stanza (avg) 123

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Abundant words.

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Written on October 16, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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