Analysis of Clean up

Doreene Felder 1967 (Phila.)



When you have realized
The way you are living
Isn't right.
Ask God to change you
So you can win this fight
Ask him to fix what you can't fix inside
So when you face others
There's no need to hide
To show you the real you
That's been hiding in time
But to like come forward
The you that's in line
The one he's fixed
And turned all around
The one who has grown
But with grace in it this time
The one who has desired him
The one who cares
But the one whose this time
Shows who really there...


Scheme ABCDCEFEDGHIJKLGMNGO
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11110 011110 101 11111 111111 1111111101 111110 11111 111011 111001 111110 01101 0111 01101 01111 1110111 01110101 0111 101111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 484
Words 102
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 378
Words per stanza (avg) 102

About this poem

About changing the your life style.

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Written on October 11, 2021

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on October 11, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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