Analysis of Trading IN

Ron Marcus 1957 (Baltimore)



Can't I trade my ol' broken down, decrepit
life?
in for a New, and improved model
that runs smoother,
acclerates faster

Can't I trade my p;' bnroken down, decrepit Life?
in for a New, and improved model?
that has far better stopping power
and can go from
discouraged, to self-
motivated/
in signifigantly less
than 3.5 seconds
has a good torque, and turning ratio
and most importantly, will not grind its wheels/

Can't I trade my ol' broken down decrepit life?
in for a New, and improved model?
Or at the very least,
zoom past a stop sign
as just a temporarty
holding pattern
who can visualize the
baited expansiveness
of the Open Highway

By Ron Marcus


Scheme abCdd bCdxxxexxx bCxxaxxex x
Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Metre 11111101010 1 010100110 1110 110 11111110101 010100110 111101010 0111 01011 100 011 110 101101010 01010011111 111111010101 010100110 110101 11011 1101 1010 11100 101 10101 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 628
Words 119
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 10, 9, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem is basically a motorized rebellion against Stagnancy.

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Submitted by ronmarcus81 on October 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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