Analysis of Surf Fin



The papaya rested on her bottom lip, as she paused to eat.
Her words were busying themselves: "Preach?, You gonna eat that?".
Eyes pleaded from the sea.
Healthily, saintly hr sung but he did not want the fruit that day.
Sluggish or not.


Scheme ABCDE
Poetic Form Tanka  (20%)
Cinquain  (20%)
Metre 0010101010111111 010101111011 110101 11011111110111 1011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 242
Words 45
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 189
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

Surfing an an ocean wave. Wanting to live.

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Written on September 10, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 05, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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