Analysis of Too Affixed To Fiction



You, me and others will disagree,
Our realities had to have are blinded.
By minds limited to dream of things,
To want and chase impressions to make...
On others to feel better each day.
With a hoping what we choose to do,
Is approved and accepted.

This rule to follow has few exceptions.
And remain we do,
Affixed to fiction!
Obeying temptations.
To become addicted to them.
As a way of life to normalize.

Even historic myths are wished to live.
Regardless of evidence and proof,
Such myths do not exist.
Leaving few willing to confess or admit,
Living lives more dependent...
Upon being deceived, hoodwinked.
And seeking to be duped.
As long as the truth to face,
Stays as far away...
From the lies they tell sold to sell,
To themselves on a daily basis.
With the giving them the satisfaction...
Someone will accept,
What they have done to appreciate.

Bringing a relief,
Their medications taken...
Have not been in vain to remain,
Staying unaware.
Unenlightened and delighted to be,
Numbed and dumbed down!

'I recently got a referral to see this doctor.
And I am telling you,
This new medication he prescribed...
Leaves me feeling incredible.'

'You do look a bit distant.
What is it that you now take?'

'Check this out...
One pill each week,
Removes not only my aches and pains.
But also...
I can face reality.
Evidence and proof of it.
To then delude,
Anything I choose not to believe.
It's not cheap though.'

'What do you mean?'

'I had to sign a ten year contract.
With a signing over all ownership,
Of my worldly possessions.'

'Yeah.
But...
That was 'after' he gave me,
A sample to test it.
And I'm telling you...
I feel young.
Rejuvenated.
As if I can walk around this town,
For hours a day.'

'So...
Where is your car.
The new one you recently bought.'

'Oh...that?
I gave it to the doctor.
Along with the keys to my home.'

'What about your wife?
Children?
Creditors and bills left unpaid?'

'Are you kidding?
One dose of that stuff,
All my troubles and worries vanished.
In seconds.'

'Have you lost your mind?'

'Yes. Yes!
Isn't it remarkable?
And guess what?'

'Wherever I lost it,
I hope it stays where it is.'

'You are absolutely nuts.'

'I know.
I love it!'

'Give me that doctor's name.'

'Call first to make an appointment.
You won't believe,
How packed his office stays!'

'I'm not into signing contracts.
And that kind of deceiving thing.'

'Ask for that sample to test it first.
And if you are still standing,
In his office without removing...
Clothes, shoes, socks, watches.
Gold rings and other jewelry?
Too connected to the truth you are.'

'Give me the name of that doctor!'

'And...
He has this fine and beautiful,
Stop a truck gorgeous receptionist?
She swears it's the best thing to happen,
In her life!'


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Poetic Form
Metre 110101001 1010111110 111001111 110101011 110111011 101011111 1010010 1111011010 00111 01110 010010 10101011 10111110 1001011111 010110001 111101 10110101101 1011010 0110011 010111 1110111 11101 10111111 101101010 101010010 1101 11111010 10001 101010 11101101 1001 010001011 1011 11001001011110 011101 11010101 11100100 1110110 1111111 111 1111 011101101 110 11110 1000111 1101 10111101 1111 1111 11110111 101010110 1110010 1 1 1110111 010111 01101 111 0100 111110111 11001 1 1111 01111001 1 1111010 01101111 10111 10 10001101 1110 11111 111001010 010 11111 11 1010100 011 010111 1111111 110101 11 111 111101 11111010 1101 111101 1101101 01110101 111101111 0111110 011001010 11110 11010100 101010111 11011110 0 11110100 101100100 111011110 001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,639
Words 511
Sentences 83
Stanzas 25
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 14, 6, 4, 2, 9, 1, 3, 9, 3, 3, 3, 4, 1, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1, 3, 2, 6, 1, 5
Lines Amount 101
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by Lp,jr. on October 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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