Analysis of Listen in pain



Have you ever had one of them days?, that you're crying in the rain,

just want to wash it all away.

Have you ever had one of them days?, that you just want the pain to fade?, and it feels like you're drowning. Someone please hear you, someone please listen.

And it seems all they ever hear is what they want, they don't reconcile what brought you here., misconstrue you like you're the one to blame. "and you just want them to hear your side.

Might as well just say fuck it, telling yourself you learned your lesson, but the voices keep saying, baby you're all I ever wanted, and I told you so, yeah I told you so. "And I hear an echo, yelling back ditto, but your actions don't say the same.

So what am I supposed to do in pain? Someone, just please listen


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Characters 762
Words 149
Sentences 13
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 97
Words per line (avg) 25
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on October 02, 2021

Submitted by cottoncandibliss.sh.mh on October 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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