Analysis of "Ode to our Veterans"
(Prof.) P J Gammarano, M.A., JD 1963 (Brooklyn)
"Ode to our Veterans" by Prof P J Gammarano, M.A., JD
It does not have to be Veteran's Day or Memorial Day...!
We take a day or two each year and commemorate
for some of us who prove in life truly great
those men & women who don the uniform
and keep our peace through sun & storm.
We hold these people in deservedly high esteem;
they sacrifice so the rest of us can live the dream.
Our conflicts many in our bright history
outcomes good, but sadness of many a casualty.
We teach our children stand, salute, pledge;
them not knowing how close we were to the edge
in WWI, Korea, and WWII;
those forces of evil almost struck us, too.
Were it not for the many who rose to fight
to prove that good over evil is what is right.
With many gone through visions of war
we only hope for never more.
Our teachers teach of our history;
our Service members know it's no mystery.
It's planning logistics, and tactical skill,
and through it all, a reluctance to kill.
If only the slain enemy could know why it's done;
our Service members do none of it for fun.
They use needed force to keep the local peace.
It affects us all globally, from Australia to Greece.
Ability to function in heat, snow, freezing, or raining...
and
serve quite bravely, doing it all with world class training...!
[ For US Naval Cmdr big bro' Peter V Jr.;
Tech Sgt. Army Ranger D-Day/ Battle-of-Bulge/ Buchenwald Liberator Veteran Peter V. Sr.;
WWII MP Uncle John, Sr.;
WWII vet Uncle Ed Leahy (each in Heaven);
and all the many millions who have also quite honorably served &
who are presently serving for enduring freedom & human well-being throughout our planet !]
Scheme | A A AABBCC DAEEXA AA FFDDGG HHII JAJ DKKHAA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101001111111 1111111001101001 110111110010 11111101101 111011010 01101111 1111000100101 110101111101 1001100101100 1111011001000 1110101011 11101110101 0101001 1101101111 01110101111 111110101111 110111011 11011101 10101110100 101010111100 11001001001 0111001011 1100110011111 101010111111 11101110101 10111100101011 010011001110110 0 1110101111110 11101111011 11101011101110100010010110 1110110 11101101010 01010101110110001 111001010101010110011010 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,628 |
Words | 302 |
Sentences | 23 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 6, 6, 2, 6, 4, 3, 6 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 141 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
This original poem is intended to commemorate all of those who came before us, who defended freedom for diverse people who are in our United States.
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Written on November 01, 2020
Submitted by PJGamma1234 on October 02, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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