Analysis of Long Day



I been dead a long time you niggas could never kill me I been real since day one you niggas could never feel me...
All this ice In my veins got my heart feeling colder
Yeah this lead on my waist got me feeling a little Bolder
Somebody done ate the chip off my shoulder
Little did they know that was all I had to eat
Now I’m starving with grief just searching for inner peace sometimes I wish I was deceased
Even a blind man can see the pain i live
I wear my emotions on my face sorry if i ain’t smiling
Been a long day of suffering in silence...


Scheme ABBBCDEFG
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111110111111111111011 1110111111010 111111111001010 1011011110 101111111111 111011110110101111101 10011110111 1110101111011110 10111100010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 544
Words 112
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 426
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted by BoogiesLyric on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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