Analysis of I won't to treat you right
My father
I won't to treat you right
I am telling you the truth
My father
i will not mistreat you
My father
Because I know that
You will hate that
My father
I also will show my respect to you
Because I just need to do that
For you
My father
I am so happy that you are my father
And I am one of you children
I am not a teenager anymore
I am one adult now
And I am you oldest child
Also father we have a good
Relationship like father and son
My father
I will not destroy our relationship
I will work hard to keep it
Going
My father
I am so happy
That i live on earth
With you other children
I still remember when I was a Teenager
I had my first communion
And I also had cried of joy
My father
During my confirmation
You thought me how to pray
And we had pray for a long time
Also my father I had given you
My offerings
For you to use
Anywhere is needed
My father
I have a good life
That I am living every day
Also I have nothing to complain about my life
My father
I am living my life to the fullest every single day
Here on earth
My father
I know that I won't live forever
Because I will die some day
And you will send you angel
That will come and take me to heaven
Where I will rest in peace
Forever
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 110 111111 1110101 110 111011 110 01111 1111 110 1101110111 01111111 11 110 11110111110 01111110 11101001 111011 0111101 10101101 01011001 110 1110110010 1111111 10 110 11110 11111 111010 11010111010 1111010 01101111 110 101010 111111 01111011 1011011101 1100 1111 10110 110 11011 111101001 1011101010111 110 1110111010100101 111 110 111111010 0111111 0111110 111011110 111101 010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 1,150 |
Words | 256 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 53 |
Lines Amount | 53 |
Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 942 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 257 |
About this poem
That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas
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Written on September 29, 2021
Submitted by aldokraas093 on September 29, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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