Analysis of Crying Mind.



My eyes drop like a sinking heart
As the weight of the world is shared
It feels as if though I cannot cry
The work to be done is of magnitude
However I am posessed throughout
My very soul is shattered into chakra
Amounts of density that scatter
So ill of mind I cry, "Does it matter"
So awe of Godly deity and glory
The stars ping like dwarf planets colliding
My blood weeps from my entire body
The water cries I'm tired when I'm happy
I'm awakened yet so tired of holding the fabric of time in my hands for so long.
The face of earth speaks through my face
To return its kisses and blessings to the
Father of all children throughout all the galaxies that will ever be.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 668
Words 132
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 539
Words per stanza (avg) 131

About this poem

Hearing the calling of angels and feeling the falling of Gods at the same time.

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Written on September 29, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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