Analysis of The Sweet Aroma Of Love

Royston 1946 (Reading)



The room was crowded, but not deterred,
she was determined to reach her Lord.
With  tears of love flowing from her eyes,
she washed Jesus feet to their surprise.

Showing her tenderness and loving care,
she then dried His feet with her long hair,
and from the jar which she opened wide
took out the sweet perfume from inside.

The room was filled with aroma sweet
as she rubbed the ointment over His feet.
Her acts of love though misunderstood,
did not pass unnoticed by her Lord.

What extravagant love Mary showed
and upon the Lord Jesus bestowed.
I wish that I could as loving be,
so fearless and unrestrained as she.


Scheme XABB CCDD EEXA FFGG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 011101101 110101101 111110101 111011101 1001000101 111111011 010111101 110101101 011110101 1110101011 01111001 111010101 101001101 001011001 111111101 11000111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 617
Words 112
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

Written after reading Luke 7: 36-47

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Submitted by royston on September 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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